Oppurtunity for New H1B visa Sponsorship

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priyanka.itoffers@gmail.com - 22 Dec 2006 10:48 GMT

Hi,

We are pleased to inform all with an exciting opportunity from ITOffers
Inc. an eight years old IT services company with extremely talented
information technology professionals having experience in a wide range
of skills.
The excellence of our services into H1B processing is the number of
clients and consultants we have served and the long-term relationships
we have established with them.
We have handful of opportunities for Information Technology
professionals having 2+ years of experience looking for H1B visa
sponsorship.

If you are interested, kindly revert back to the following queries as
early as possible.
·    Updated Resume
·    Years of Indian Experience
·    Current Employer details
·    Current Location
·    Visa status
·    Contact Numbers (Mobile & Land)
Do forward the above information for your references.
We shall be happy to assist you on any further with this regard.
Thanks& Regards,

Priyanka
Technical Recruiter
IT Offers Inc.
3330 Cumberland Blvd. Ste 500
Atlanta, GA 30339

Phone: 770-627-9673 Xn: 205
Email: priya@itoffers.com

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Tor Iver Wilhelmsen - 27 Dec 2006 15:55 GMT

> We are pleased to inform all with an exciting opportunity from ITOffers
> Inc. an eight years old IT services company with extremely talented
> information technology professionals having experience in a wide range
> of skills.

... except proper English. First assignment: Replace "inform all with"
with something better.

> The excellence of our services into H1B processing is the number of
> clients and consultants we have served and the long-term relationships
> we have established with them.

Second assignment: Here it's "excellence" that's used wrong. What can
you use instead?

> We have handful of opportunities for Information Technology
> professionals having 2+ years of experience looking for H1B visa
> sponsorship.

Don't forget the "a"! The "a" is inportant.

> If you are interested, kindly revert back to the following queries as
> early as possible.

"Revert back to" - come, now, that's just sloppy.

> · Updated Resume
> · Years of Indian Experience

They're called Native Americans surely? And they probably make more
money off casinos than you can offer fo IT work.

> · Contact Numbers (Mobile & Land)

You do not have to go to sea to use mobile phones you know.

> Do forward the above information for your references.

Ah, those pesky prepositions. As a bonus assignment, try rewriting
that using "to".

> We shall be happy to assist you on any further with this regard.

Another one! Try "in".

> Atlanta, GA 30339

Really?

> Email: priya@itoffers.com

Looks different fgrom the other one. Which one do you want to use?

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